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【Eng】簡單技巧令 introduction 提升一個層次
英文作文開頭係成篇文既高分既關鍵，我會講下點寫可以有更好既Language分同更加可以impress個marker 技巧 1
要引起懸念，我地可以試下用第一招：「反問法」。反問唔洗好深，但加一句，成篇文即刻生動好多，Language分肯定有提升，marker都會有更好既impression。不過你可能會話，反問句又真係易左啲，好似小學生作文既技倆咁。
例子
Rhetorical Questions
Have you ever imagined that your every move is under supervision? Indeed, some applications are tailored for surveillance purposes which parents might resort to for the sake of keeping an eye on their children's online activities, ranging from their messages to their website traffic. Apparently, the installation of such programs is an intrusion on children's privacy, sparking off disputes between parents and children.
(Modified from DSE 2016 Q4)
技巧 2
今次我地攞左一條時事題目，目的係要演示點樣寫一段較具說服力而要展示到英語實力（語法、句式同詞彙）既intro。下面例子中紅色字既就係一啲新聞時事入面常見既字眼，用得準確之餘內容同詞藻分數均有提升。
而比較特別既係，我地唔單單用生活例子同時事議題做引入，更加可以援引事實或數據（唔一定要好準確，無人會查證，合理就可以啦）黎論證，情況就如中文既論說文章一樣。句式上我地會多用relative clauses黎加插額外資訊（雖然係小學初中學既，但用到就會加好多分）。段落末我地唔需要寫Therefore, I agree/disagree that ...，而係直接對應上述議題say Yes/No。
而比較特別既係，我地唔單單用生活例子同時事議題做引入，更加可以援引事實或數據（唔一定要好準確，無人會查證，合理就可以啦）黎論證，情況就如中文既論說文章一樣。句式上我地會多用relative clauses黎加插額外資訊（雖然係小學初中學既，但用到就會加好多分）。段落末我地唔需要寫Therefore, I agree/disagree that ...，而係直接對應上述議題say Yes/No。
例子
Current news / recent findings
On the two sides of Victoria Harbour are a number of temporary promenades and parks which are yet to be developed. The government has recently proposed setting up world-class shopping malls as well as financial centres along these parts of our habour front, while some activist groups rejected the proposal in favour of development of public space, which currently constitutes to only less than 10% of useful land in Hong Kong, according to government statistics. Is it really beneficial to the well-being of society as a whole if the harbour front is solely for commercial use? The answer is an absolute no.
(Modified from DSE 2015 Q5)
所以話呢，英文作文要5**其實唔算難，有足夠詞語表達，再加上語法唔好出錯，咁基本上要粒*都十拿九穩。想進步？睇多啲書同埋跟我學嘢啦！
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